The first edition of Leaves of Grass did not burst onto the
market and into the homes of folks. It was not in high demand, but Whitman
wanted it to be- he wanted it to be carried around with all- physical or
mentally. Like anything (ex. Movies) with potential, it is revised and redistributed
as something familiar and also something new and different. I actually don’t
have the 1855 version of the book (I ordered the wrong copy) and it’s been
difficult for me to find it online in a way where I could accurately note the
differences. From what I understand, his poems were originally title-less and
the copy was much slimmer. Since then, he added more poems stretching the size
of the book while altering what was already in the book. I have noticed that
Song of Myself is altered in ambiguous locations (from what I’ve gone over) and
the thought is there but my copy has a few more words here or there. It’s
interesting that these differences DO create a new text, a modification. Some
of the differences may be slight, but they alter the context and
interpretation. He had more creative control with Thayer and Eldridge (1860)
designing a more involved cover etc. He used this control to draw upon the idea
of being one with nature, using a butterfly, sunrises and more ethereal
subjects from nature.
Whitman
begs me to wonder: is there a true edition? Nabokov did a similar process with
his novel Despair. He had his
original edition, his English translation and then a revised edition later on. What
does it mean for an author to alter what he/she writes, why can’t they? I asked
my friend (an extremely talented art professor in my opinion) if he finished a
painting I had seen him working on. He simply told me that no painting was ever
really done, that they are all a work in progress forever. He worked with oil
paints which take several days to dry, allowing for the artist to come back the
next day and continue manipulating the painting as if there was no lapse in
time. This ability to alter also distinguishes the painting as delicate- the
paint can literally be wiped off the canvas, erasing all the work. As I took up
painting for fun, I realized he was right. I literally leave certain parts of
my paintings unfinished in order to keep that window open. (There is a small area here that is always left undone- it is reassuring to know that I can still change something.)
I haven’t sprayed
any sort of fixing agent on my paintings – they are not fixed. I think Whitman and company
enjoy the freedom to change their mind, to change a word – add and subtract.
Perhaps Whitman pioneered the idea of art as a process never to be finished.
There can be no one true version because every version is true; they all
represent an aspect of the complexities within the human who created it.
Excellent. The very fact of continuous editing tells us something about how he sees the poem as process rather than product . . . that's kind of a weird way to think about a poem, from a poet's perspective.
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